"Firing in shorter bursts will help you control of your weapon more easily, and get more shots where you want them" There are one or two more in-game tips with glaring grammatical errors. Please fix these.
It's simply not professional and gives a bad impression of the game. You're free to celebrate illiteracy if you want to but it makes no sense from a business perspective.
"One weapon is not inherently stronger than another, but give you different options for different situations!" You had one job to do, Loading Screen Tip Guy, ONE Job!!
You're such a noob. EVERYONE knows the grip does nothing for grammar. He should 'get an advanced laser sight'.
Shenanigans Shenanegans They both work although the bottom one is incorrect. I am confused right now.
I say convert all in-game prompts and tips to Engrish. "Shoot less bullets more often. It give great and powerful manipulation of guns."