trying to make a vid that matches this music ends up being a lot more work than it's worth for such a clippy video...
I think that you should cut your action stuff shorter. Now you see you shooting someone, then you still show a few seconds of reload and walking around before you cut to the next clip. It needs a bit more action I think, you need to see the goal the player had when he went there. You have a few nice ones already where you blow up stuff and just after the explosion starts to dissipate you cut away to the next shot, those give it more speed and less anti-climax. "OMG he blow up that vehicle, nice! And now we still see the same guy as he reloads and starts walking around, oh he got shot". It feels anticlimactic.
